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本人由於經上幫人改文, 所以對於改文有相當的經驗。
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Nowadays, many youngsters in Hong Kong, especially girls are going to lose their weight. Many methods they use to lose weight are unhealthy and not work. Why do young people so likely to look thinner? In this essay I will examine the cause and the harmful effects of lose weight.
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