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On the first part of the statement, it says that there is so much information available on the Internet. Although it is correct, there is a loop hole to it. Let us compare the traditional method of "teacher-teaching" with the suggested method of "internet-self-learning". The traditional method requires a teacher who has limited knowledge while the suggested method consists of unlimited information; therefore, the suggested method seems more powerful. However, information from the internet may not be certified, so who can insure the Internet is helpful and correct. Everyone can write and publish onto the Internet no matter right or wrong, on the other hand, teachers are approved. Students are worth to be taught by teachers for they are educated, but the information that flows around the internet is not certainly correct. Therefore, the knowledge gotten from the Internet may be wrong, but the chance decreases if they are from a teacher. That is a guaranteed confidence for parents and students.
