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以下是我的文章:
Many teenagers try to avoid facing a lot of stress while they get poor achievement in the HKCEE . The main reason is that they do not know how to plan their way out and feel very confused . Therefore, they try to evade themselves by doing something . For example , they may occasionally fascinate some singers or actors. They will spend all of the time doing something related to their icons , such as searching their photos or songs on the Internet,watching their films and reading their news .These provide them a way to temporarily forget about the harsh realities of life .
Ah Yan, of course, was another example for evading . Apart from playing the online games, she did nothing ! She even stopped bathing and rarely combed her hair as she was addicted to the games . She said that she felt good in the game world as she kept the good score to reach the highest level . However, when she went out and faced the real world, she felt low again ! It told us that Ah Yan lost her confidence in herself after the failure of the exam and just evaded it .
